My high school literature teacher in Poland spoke with a heavy German accent, and she taught us logical thinking; what I found later was the German/Prussian thing. It looks like, no more.
You write like an American fluffy. I am interested in the subject of your article, but I could not figure out what you want to say. As you gained a few extra cents on that occasion, I earned the right to suggest you rewrite your article as a conventional essay. You write like Rush Limbaugh would talk.
The links you need are in my article “Writing is not about writing.”